Wow! This story had me all types of upside down and sideways. There is no "love story" here, to me its just some guys twisted thinking that he/she decided to put on paper. None of what he/she put in that story made any type of sense. How can you be a boy but not a boy but a girl....and how can you be a man but not a man?! Then this whole business of the marriage thing....girl/boy/it shoots out of a tube and lands in your arms and all of a sudden you are in heaven and need to marry this being, and this being says"Wednesday" and you go about your day like nothing ever happened...WHAT! That is some craziness there, I know I have heard and I know all to well about love at first sight but thats taking it a little extreme, even with love at first sight you still wait a few days of getting to really know one another before you offer marriage. Craziness is what this story is.


I found this to be a bit of a slow read, but I did find a few areas of it funny. The biggest was his wife, she seemed to be so plain and uncaring. She never really says much to show that she truly loves her husband. She's very fast to accuse him and to leave him! This paragraph, page 396, Kirsten appeared at the doorway to the room, an armload of pale brown groceries gripped. "Why are you home in the middle of the day?" Her voice, in an eternity of sameness, was accusing. "Did I go to Mars" he asked her. "You would know.".....then after a small conversation she says, "Dous, if you don't pull yourself together, we're through. I'm going to leave you." After he explains that hes in trouble, she puts down the groceries and leaves!!!! WHAT!!!! Who in their right mind does that!!!! It's like she had no connection with him at all!!!